Writing

Writing In term one and two we have done a lot of writing in groups. I am in with Miss Bates' group because I feel that I need a little bit more of help so I can write a better story. It really helps and I think I am improving in my writing. We would go over to the table and would write a story with her and the other people in the group. We started to write an Andy Griffiths story and we had to start with the intro and the three middle paragraphs and then the conclusion. Once we had done we started to do the editing and then started to type it up on the computer. My Portal story that was probaby the hardest story. We had fifteen minutes to do a good plan and type a rough copy on the computer and then a good copy. The letter to Cadbury: we sent a letter to someone who you can complai ton or have a new idea. I wrote to Cadbury and for a new flavour. I found that story the easiest and it was the shortest story .Last year I didn’t know how to do a good plan and this year I do. You start with the intro with all the characters( etc ) and then you do three middle paragraphs and then the conclusion.

Andy story. Portal story.



Cadbury letter.